Trickle...
you sound really boring in the begining intro it doesnt get me excited...to many effects on ya vocals...flow fell of at about the third bar....theese lyrics are good but your delivery and emotion lack so do ya swagger... you gotta sell yaself to people.... the hook is pretty dope ... first guy was a few days better than the second guy...haha.. yeah just keep elevating.

for oblivious artist...
shoulda put a hook in...it was just one verse dissing people on the fact they rap for money... dont really make much sense to me... the flow was good lyrics coulda used some work so could have emotion there were a couple good stand out lines...i'm trying to focus on the lyricism of this song because the overall banger appeal isnt there...i like music that you can dance too...6/10

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