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Old 04-09-06, 04:39 PM   #10
Past Tense
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damn i can def. tell you got a lot better...your pressense is good and your flow is good...but your emotion is lacking....put a lil bit more emotion into it...the beat is fire..if you made that then your the best on rv.....this is pretty hot....def. the hottest you've done.......the hook is pretty catchy....you def. lost a lot of that accent you had....hmmm not too bad...just up the quality a tad bit

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