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Old 04-11-06, 11:14 AM   #14
Triple_N
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K...returning favor..typin as listening....oh naw I aint likign how son came in....he is OVER-forcing his voice...if u he jus used his normal tone this verse woulda been so much stronger....k..next verse....damn u got a over-exaggerated tone too...u do it a lil better but the exaggerated voice got played out in the 80s fam....ya flow was somewhat rushed IMO....this beat is weird...but I like...I like the conceptualism...an the abstract approach but u aint execute it how u could have, this song oozes potential...but yall delivery hurt ya, ya flows was sparatic...for a few bars u was right then you'd lose it for a few then comeback....lyrically simplistic format...but conceptually nice...yall kinda on sum Murs shit...he uses a simplistic type rhymes but has a deep message...this wasn't persay a deep track but it was unique an I enjoyed it for most part...I jus think it coulda been better....didn't like that lil bridge yall did when beat dropped either..if yall coulda made that more catchy it woulda took focus away from a few of the other flaws as well. But all in all this was a decent track...jus needs that polish ya know...anyways this the first time I ever peeped you cho & MI for that matter too...keep dropping.......1
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