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I don't lose
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word man...audio back...does that mean i get to win a battle...haha....
you flow on beat nice....the when i was 6 line..wasnt spectaular n seemed forced...listen to the song youll know what im talkin bout....your voice sounds flexed like your tryin to sound hard...could be the effects on the voice...track is short, oh well....the intro and outro were unnessiscary but i mean your not too far...work on ya voice or the effects on it but ya flow is coming along....not bad
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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