No Skillz? Please I'll Murder This Newbie And Skin Him Alive
How You Bigger? Your Girl Dropped You Pants....
....And It Brought Tears To Her Eyes!!
ehhhh. the little dick jokes have been done over and over again, for you to pull one of these days it has to be EXTRA creative. this wasnt.

Now I Got A Holiday On My Back? I'm Gettin Famous
While You Rollin On 22's...As The Diameter For Your Anus!!
blaaa. not feeling it man. just came off weak

Please, I Won't Even Battle This Kid, I'll Just Punch You
And Watch A Grin Grow Across You Face....
....When Another Mans Yells Fuck You!!
no again, this was too simple. and instead of mans I think you meant man. cause mans makes it sound weird. you need to make your set ups tie into your punches though

This Is Only A Keystyle, No Time To Beat You Down Proper
The Physical Abuse He Can Give....
....Is To Kids Who Go Visit This Doctor!!
this doesnt even make sense dude. the way you worded it just make it come off bad. I know what you were getting at. and even if you worded it right it wouldnt have been good.

No Time Keep Listening To Your Shit, Is This The Second In Line
Cause I Already Beat Your Homie.....
.....And Now Your Homie Wants To Beat You From Behind!!
no again. you need to be more creative. and stop with all the gay/dick jokes. do one or two. and do them creatively if your gonna do them, but dont od

sorry for the harsh feed. but Im just being honest. pz

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