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Old 04-12-06, 04:57 AM   #11
David Lama
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why this bitch started to diss, i dont need to try for this
how many people can you say you beat?, where is ya list?
this is too simple man. no punch really., just filler

you a bitch that needs a lesson, plus some aggression
wounder why im so good, bitch this is my perfection
again filler. in disses you need punches. this wasnt a punch

watch as i teach, your skill's couldnt elevate pass a child-seat
a wet blunts the only thing you can pass around me
both played, and the set up wasnt tied into the punch, be creative man. come on

im your master now speak, cuz like boot-leggers i'll let the sound-leak
and use every fucking weapon agenist you thats around me
set up wasnt too bad, best line so far. the next line wasnt good.

and ali aint so slow, you just so slow to know whos MAHUMMED ALI
you took a couple of shot, but why me,
probley notice u'r skill's like shut-eyes something i cant-see
this was too wordy. you need to use the least amount of words you can use in text/audio. rap period!. if your gonna do the 3 line style do it right. this wasnt the right way. it was way too stetched

N u'r girl should be a farmer, the way i use her to plant MY SEEDS
you could live in a far off planets w/ naked janet and you still aint something to peep
far off played with naked janet? wtf. thats just whack man, your reaching.

im straight up dumping the 3, you couldnt land a punch if you was jump'in me
but you a FAG, so like horney dogs you rather be hump'in me
and you dont got no lead, so the only thing in your TRUNK is A TREE...
again you used the 3 line style wrong and stretched it the fuck out. bad

WAIT A SEC whats hes name again?

let me know if you want-war, i'll dump more
spit acid on your dumb-sore, having you pose'in stiff in a clothes store
ehhh this was just filler

you would think hes a manican, ooh-shit REX is back start panican
i'll detach ya wrist, staple it back, and chop at ya hands-again
noooo!!!!. this was filler again

im sick with the disses, you lick when toss'in kisses
drown you in a pool getting baptizing by christan
again no, filler

i slap-guys for bitch'in, you spit but guns never click'in
you a virgin-wanksta, so ya VACUM-HOE's the only thing you stick'in
whack again. come on man, this didnt even make sense, and was forced and weak

and i aint no crip when i say i'll leave your BLOOD-DRIP'IN BITCH!
this is just a warm up,
dont bother to clap back either BITCH!
blood lines are played and well. this just wasnt good. bad closer. filler

sorry for being harsh. I'm just being honest.
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