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Old 04-12-06, 05:15 AM   #3
David Lama
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]bitch ass kidd, u dont know me.
u dont know me.
umm lets see what you got

who is this motherfuckin new-b callin me a crackhead.
u cant rap for shit bitch open ur mouth again and u dead.
this was filler, too simple and it had no punch, try to punch, this was simple a threat, a threat written in filler

ima blow u away with a blind fold a round my eyes.
jump out from one of ur b-day presents and scream SURPRIZE!
this was some kindergarten shit man, lol. I can picture a five year old saying this, come on dude. step it up. this was bla

bitch, im a new 2 Rv, but u a light wieght flyin low.
ill leave u like muhamid ali bitch, movin so slow.
at least its almost a punch, even though its a played idea. its better than what you've had so far. still not good and not creative. use your mind my friend. maybe eat some fish to help motivate your brain?

i dont need a gat to kill ur sorry punk rhymes.
ill spit slow so u wont have 2 rewind 5 times.
noooo and use a multi for god sakes. rhyming only one word at the end is not good. try to rhyme more.

bitch, i dont know u and i really dont care.
but u diss me again fool ima have u gaspin for air.
again this is a threat, its not even a funny or creative one. its just filler.

if u cant play with the big doggs, then stay on the porch.
if u fuck with S to the Z then realize u will get torched.
noooo

stupid hoe, u like courge the cowerdly dog.
whining and shit when i come along.
this was plain whack dude. come on homey.

should have left that shitty rhyme at home.
u like a bitch with no food, all u do is roam.
the punch is there. although it wasnt connected well. at least you did a punch

no place 2 go and u got nuttin 2 eat.
u fucked with da best and got left in the street.
no

sorry for being harsh, just being honest.
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