Thread: Mimesis Who?
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Old 04-12-06, 05:30 AM   #5
David Lama
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Round 1 In Progress..
I know Stress....Ive been thru alot, And mims bearly even hot..
Soon as the temperature rises, he covers himself in sun block
hmmm. this wasnt bad

YOU ain't never seen a mic & An I Doubt your respected among the real
All you do is Spit saliva in the face to try and make 'em feel
na man. not feeling this at all. corney and weak. kinda fillerish

Ya Fates Sealed...& Emcees turnin a blind eye 'cause ya rhymes lie
When its your turn to pop a punch Everybodies wavin' bye-bye
no not good. "pop a punch" and "bye bye"? .. how are you dissing him?

they couldnt bare to be torturted wit'cha useless ramblin'
I'ma be like clint eastwood and ask if you feel lucky gamblin
not good. come on dude be creative. this just wasnt good

punk!...goin line 4 for line with the greatest you better be a wild card
soft as silicone, but determined to liveout the name 'n make ya style hard
wtf. no. corney and just reaching for concepts basically

You's a fraud! Talkin 'bout me all night, But I ain't losin no sleep
Lets go to war and i'ma bet your life I wont be the one losin my peeps
no. fillierish. this is just a threat. not a funny or creative one. therefore its weak and does nothing

Im cruisin to beats, an Mims ridin' hard on that motorized scooter
lucky we online, 'cause if ya step on my feet in the real I would shoot-ya
no.. same as above. weak

take that as a warnin shot,I'm heavy on the beef...But not obese
hardcore wigger. workin a ''band'' is the only time ya strapped witta peice
played and weak

clap at ya teeth, flap them gums, i'm eatin all this cookies crumbs
I'd say you was a hobo rhymer....But I dont wanna offend the bums
no.. these type of lines are done over and over. not good

BITCH, You wanna go to a fight?...Theres not a ''blue brother'' in Sight.....
Not a white flag in flight... Your so desperate you even start flyin a kyte
no

I started reading round 2. and I had to stop. it was basically the same no/no lines I been seeing, just with the 3 line style, almost as if a different person wrote it. but on the same level. weird. but whatever dude

just elevate. this was a weak diss

sorry for being harsh, just being honest
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