yo jet... where you from? sounds like ya got an Amercanized accent... you did kinda lack emotion... i felt what you was saying but i also felt you coulda been more effective by wording some things differently... sometimes it's not what you say but HOW you say it... beat was aiight... didn't really do too much for me... ya "s"'s stood out kinda strong in ya verse... quality wasn't too bad though... flow?... kinda iffy... not bad but not great either ... oh, and if ya did drop like tupac i'm sure you'd win some battles...lol ...but then, it'll be because ya sound like someone else and not "Jet"... what ya could do, though is use the same intensity that Pac used and actually sound like you believe what you spitting... you gotta make kats feel that you are actually going through it as ya say it, nah mean?

overall, it's an ok track... need to hear more shyt of yours... you been beefing with dudes about ya audio since i been here on RV and i prolly only heard 2 of ya tracks (including this one)

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