ok im just bein real here. i wasnt feelin it. it just doesnt flow right in text. everyone will probably interpret the tempo of it differently. now i am of fan of the bang bang type music but it never really belongs in text. not cause people will hate (which they will) but because people will not be able to catch your real thoughts in your peice. but since i am supposed to be leaving feed I will tell u that u need to show a little more complexity in your chorus. simplicity never works in that area. keep at it though man

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