too much to quote, this was definetly a hawt track...diggin' your hook better than the real one and ya verses were definetly better than Jeezy's shit lol...this sounds like something Kanye would say if he was on the remix to this, your style reminds me of his and that's good cuz I love Kanye To Tha...all you gotta do is clear up ya vocals on the 1st verse and hook...sounds like you got a tongue ring, or your tongue is curled while you're spittin' lol...whatever you did to the 2nd verse, it was a lot clearer than the 1st part...

overall, track was tyte, once you fix the quality I'd DL it and bang it

P.S. didn't realiZe it was another person on the 1st verse
my commentary still rings true lol