I don't lose
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word...aside from quality issues....zone needs to pronunciate his words better...and you need to work on breathing a lil at the begining of ya verse....sounds like you a lil out of breath n struggling to say some of the words....jus some constructive critisim but you said its old...so you prolly got that worked out by now
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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