What's hot:
beat is pretty coo...I like the melody
flow isn't bad
Lyrics are personal = good


What's not:
You need to up your presence...you sounded set far back in the beat...up your dubs...that'll fix some of that

Delivery could be more dynamic, not terrible though

Overall: Hook was too complicated...sounded like a verse...IMO, hooks should be repetitive, almost chant like to "hook" the listener

Good drop tho otherwise



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