word up bro. u still got it, good way to open this piece and i liked the ending too. kinda sad though. liked the message. is this in ur journal cus i never saw it b4... and kinda wish u told me cus i wanted in. wut ever we will do one 2gether later.
oh and u need 2 links on where u left feed on others open mics. so get chopping.

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.