This was beautiful. The flow complimented the piece perfectly. Imagery, emotion, and metaphors were all there. My fav line:

Feels Like Yall Skippen Rocks Arcoss The River I Cryed
Tryed To Brain Storm But My Heads Filled With Clear Skys

Real good. I'd nominate it. Peace.

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Was he robbed of the ashphalt that cushioned his face?