now look daubs... i am not going to hate on you ...you are just a kid... but for one .. u.k. cats shouldnt try to rap tough for your patois makes you sound like a buncha fags to begin with ...you should rap about flowers and bunnies and shit .... you are sporatic with the flow... slow it down a bit especially for this beat...i would have to say the writing isnt too terribly bad... but it is hard to understand ... and being american your slang is different ... i dont know about the chip shot line ... but at least youve got balls enough to spit shit... try to find some better beats slow down dont get your knickers all in a knot... take some exlax ... or stick to graphix...

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