Y'all can say I'ma terrorist, but really, that shit ain't gon hurt
Cuz the way I'm droppin' bombs on Austin, I'll leave Texas on high alert
-----this was aiight..... even tho u had to explain it-----
You got way to many quotes, your lines are wack, structure's too big
Dude, you're flirting with wackness?...
............................................. More like you're married to it, kid!
--very played....i've seen the flirting with wackness like a thousand times--
I'ma two time tourney champ. So me wack? Forget your jokes
I M list-ed as a great, while yours is just great for getting votes
----well it was a personal...not hard hitting tho----
You used to be a hotshot. You had your riches, but now you're poor
Your dick's kinda like a trolly car.....
.................................................. ............. no one's on it anymore!
-----this was aiight...you could have picked a better setup-----
Speak now if you want me to show you mercy, before I give you the boot
But when it comes for speakin' up for themselves, we all know that mimes is mute
----what does that even mean...that he doesnt speak up for themselves----
40-plus lines? Please... 24 is more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
......but I see your verse beat me to the chase!
-----this was good...best one so far-----
Your sis is such an e-hoe (hijo), hispanics thinking she's your son
So why blow my own horn, when your sister already got it done?
-----na this was wack-----
I'm known to knock out wacks, yo... da raps'll damage ya
I ain't known to put out wack rhymes...
............................................. but today I'm Mim's manager!
----lol...this was cool----
Your chance of winning's slim, kid. You want personals? You won't find shit
I see my glass more than half full, while you're just stuck seeing from behind it
------na i dont really like the whole... use a pic for a punch thing------
(pic)
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat...
..................................... then check mim's next verse for my punches!
-----ok.....i guess.....sorta-----
Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you, rock, papers, scissors... I'll just throw 'em all at your face!
------this seems like a filler.....like somethin u just thought up to fill...jk----
------------------------------but it still sucked-----------------------------------
Dude says he's smart, he's got a lot ahead of him, but no one's seen 'em
Yea, your future's got some bright spots...
......................................... but the rest are waiting for you to clean 'em!
-----------you could have used this against anyone-------------
--------------------not a good closer at all------------------------
spul's verse: 6/10.................
Every week you asked me about lines. . ha, nobody's heard of this kid
But yeah, this is a GREAT battle. .
. .Mimesis versus flipped Mimesis concepts worded to shit
------lol......good opener------
Even you know I'm better than you. . so sit back and just listen
You succumb. . uhh. . ahh, fuck it at least your face will still give in
-------ummm...na.....didnt like it at all-------
On RM you're a joke. . winning by no shows, while I'm smackin' dudes
You're wack. .
. .and that's so Truman that you'll get a Doctrine named after you
--------I didnt really like this but thats just my opinion...lol--------
This is a waste of my time. . know you're going to get wrecked quick
Cause the last time you Cena win you had to battle yourself to get it
--------this was aiight....wordplay was cool-------
Fuck excuses. . YOU STILL DID IT. . and you still gonna spit softly
Bringing so many negatives inverse. . it's no wonder you flip off me
--------lol....this was cool.....but i'm sure some herb voting wont git it--------
Haha, cried to Kemp for HOURS about the lines, your gettin rattled, bitch
You just ain't good enough to go .44. .
. .now that's just what I'm going to end this battle with
-----------na....this smells like a filler--------------
Stuck on some elementary shit. . but don't worry, I dont' fight sly
While your dopeness is such affable it's no wonder your such a nice guy
------lol...i had to look up affable.....this was an aiight line-----
NO WAY are you going to win. . man, I'll just keep hurtin this geek
I keep getting verse of the week. .
. .while you keep setting the milestone for verse of the weak
--------this was herbish werdplay...but atleast its werdplay--------
So much better than you. . seriously, I'ma just keep beating this guy
I'm the cornerstone of ill. . while cornerstone is where you sleep at night
------na this was a wack filler-----
You're trash. . and with your wack mixtape don't even plan for spinning
Though SPuL's the man of the hour. .
. .cause he has such a minute chance of winning
-------lol......this was aiight-------
That's true as hell too. . I'm just better and won't stop owning this dyke
And I'll leave you carrying so many Caen's hippies will take over the site
------lol.....this was dope....but thats just my opinion------
Believe it, you ain't on my level. . so I'll either keep beating this guy or *
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. .* I'll drop a footnote that'll put your whole fucking face on the choir
-----------this was aiight....not the best closer...but its a closer-------
mimesis verse: 8/10.........
if my vote counts..........I vote mimesis.....he had more personals and less fillers than spul
overall....this was a cool battle
but no hate........and if u found any of my critique.....a lil' harsh.....well i'm like that with everyone.....so STOP COMPLAINING!!!!!!!!!!!.......lol......but n e wayz
................VOTE: Mimesis
