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...i'm da nicest...
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
IP:
Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before
genius at all/seen it before.....u might be able to pull that off in an audio if u have an accent,but it doesnt rhyme n in text u gonna really make sure u rhyme....
the punch is ....ok at best...pretty played concept
Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw.
Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score
was in saw /even the score
doesnt rhyme AT ALL...PUNCH....EHH DOESNT HIT HARD
Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes
You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe.
PLAYED CONCEPT,N WACK
Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
HAHA i like that one....
but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery
WACK
Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n'
we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman...
ehh....pretty weak
Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap
If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.."
GAYYYYYYYYYYYYY
shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope..
ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat
...SUCKS
everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
EHH NOT FEELIN IT
i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
HAHA I LIKE THAT ONE
and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans
but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it
WEAK..n doesnt rhyme
i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction
like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection
WEAK
i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin'
see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him
WEAK
just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit
you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live
suckS ..i see where u are goin with it but u just worded it all wrong
dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch
yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit
i guess there's wordplay there but its weak n i'm not feelin it
its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes
so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro
.......dont like it at all
...basically,u each had one punch i likes....u both had trouble rhymin
i'm seein played and weak punches from both
not gonna vote just feedback
i'd say its pretty even
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