ight im listenin..frist dude

flow-fell off a lil bit but mostly stayed on 4/5
delivery-5/5
presence-5/5
lyrics-4/5 iono they were good just lacking a lil sumthin

second dude
flow-5/5
delivery-5/5 i like the lil lauren hill thing you did towards the end nice way to put some comedic relief into the song
presence-5/5
lyrics-4.5/5

third dude
flow-4.5 fell off a lil but mostly stayed on your flow is like E-40's
delivery-5/5
presence-5/5
lyrics-4.5/5

over all i give this track a 4.5/5 i liked straight up..just work on flows and lyrics more(not sayin that their bad just not great yet) and ya'll should be straight good track peace

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