Thread: Teenage Love
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Old 04-15-06, 12:34 PM   #3
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ight listenin

quality really bad but ive heard worse

flow-you sound like a down south rapper 2/5 at least you stayed on beat just a boring flow
presence-0/5 i just didnt feel you on the track
delivery-0/5 you didnt bring it(in my randy jackson from american idol voice) it didnt sound like you meant wat you were saying
lyrics-1/5 i mean your lacking in quality of your lyrics just gotta up vocab and add multis metaphors similies and shit like that

overall 1/5 this was a boring track nice beat though and no beef just tellin u what i think
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