hmmm you let the beat ride for too long before you started spitting... shoulda added some ad libs or something... 1st dude sound real mono-tone... the second guy's loader than the 1st... needs to turn down his vocals a lil bit... show'ed more emotion than the 1st guy... flow was decent... slipped off slightly in some parts like you were struggling to remember what to say... than got it half way in... other than that... shit was ok...

Anyway RTF... Check out that MC shit

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