Not bad... Short aggressive rant trying to completely re-analyse a classic. I liked the initial concept of the piece but for some reason I just never connected. Like, I got a real angry harsh tone when I was reading so I felt something clearly if you inspired a specific tone in my inner monologue, but somethign about it jsut felt off the whole way through for me. I mean, when I look at it and re-read it it has nothing wrong contectually and it has all the elements of a good Om, it's just something personally I dont like I guess *Shrug* Lol, and I dont know why but when I was reading it I kept reading it the way Run DMC raps "My Addidas" for some reason haha. Good piece overall man, just didn't connect with me though.