i liked it...nice flow and rhyme. nice vocab too. emotion towards the piece and concept went WELL.



letters come togeather easoly and fluent,
my black board listen and learn my students,
read each line and try to define each bar,
as i reach to deep minds near and far,
close your eyes and read your own rhymes,
then read mine and realize its about time,
to open your mind as LS starts to creep,
cause in my dome still waters run deep.
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^ my favorite part of the piece.

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