Voted For: The Revelation

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I'll start wit the losing Battla

Ever since i came to da site, dis cracka is tryna fight-
why dont u look at ur myspace, and see who is arright-
----no punch here tho i fink u tried, jus Bad line----

ur graphix suck foo, i killin u dead too-
ill come like a blood, and ill pop u outta da blu-
----horriBle setup line..first line suxx..sekond kinda koo--

and hows your chink dude? he suckin ya dick too-
he wont even read our verses, and he go vote for u-
--this aint no audio...u seem to Be writin fo one..Weak---

i aint come to dis site, to start no beef tho-
just these fagget ass niggas startin too ho mo-
----...stretcKhed rhyme...bad lines...----

dis site sucks, nigga and all ur rhymes is probably bit-
come to rapmusic.com, you're whole shitt will get slit-
---Ur on here..but your disrespektin and ur losin..hmm---

-OVERALL - - BAD VERSE NO cKONTENT NO PUNcKHES NO cKLEVER NO NUFFIN...-


Vote For The Revelation

You've got nothing on me bro your skill is invisible like dust,
If you are an artist, then someone please take away his brush.
---dust isn't invisiBle...secKond line suxkks...---


Now what can I say, this dude is pathetic and he got pissed,
Cuz I said the truth? Well just like his skill, his site doesn't exist.
-----old puncKh in secKond line...-----

Kids a pansy, he backs out more than France call him a bitch.
I'll remix this kid, and still wouldn't the first on the artist list.
---first nicKe lil summfin the first line is nyke..jus kinda komplex...takes whyle to get it ---

Throw him some critique and he'll reply with a temper fit,
The only thing you design is the herbs and the rest of your clique.
----.....not feelin AT ALL !!-----

Now the game has spit you out and shredded you with cheese graters,
Cuz the only artists that fear you, are kindergarten fingerpainters.
-----FINALLY A GOOD PUNcKH NICE cKLOSER akshually won u da battle-----

VOTE : THE REV
WHY?: His verse waz more battle geared more komplex more Better...he had one mo punch and he had a generally better writin pieke...

Both Stay Up

hollaatchagerrl
-Truth-

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