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Old 04-20-06, 07:59 AM   #5
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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IP:

I must admit I peed this a while ago and didn't really feel it !

but today I get it alot more,.. I understand the whole topic
& point you was trying to make, but I didn't like the way I
couldn't find the flow until the last part of the verse.

But on reading it today I feel the verse more,. RV is to set
in it's ways and when u try to come original u don't get no
feed.

U stayed on topic, put your views of the subject across and
made me think which was good, I still wasn't feeling the flow
but the last 12 bars when u changed up we dope,..

U always u great vocab, with a nice complexity this was a
decent drop, not the best from u but it was still hott.

Stay up fams

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