since i luv makin luv songs i'll take a listen to this one..

beats aiight.. lol qualitys okay but tahts cool, thats how i started haha.. lol some notes are flat but its nice try haha.. corny ofcourse, but i guess your girl will luv it lol.

verse 1: your flow is solid, delivery is pretty nice and goes with the beat perfectly. Lyrics are good, but should show just alittle more emotion. pretty nice. well lyrics were very nicely put, gj =P

feelin everything on here, xept the singing hahaha.. its cool lol.. ur girl will like it.. much props fam.. i didnt drop ne songs in SC but u could check out my "luv" songs at my myspace =P haha..

www.myspace.com/dabatos

word much props fam

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