Beginning Your Ending
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IP:
U ain't a legend anywhere, so stop ur boastin son...
Cuz ur verses are liked by nobody & also posted by one...
I'm not jokin dude, for real, u'll get broke in two...
Yea I wuz feelin u for a minute.....but then stopped chokin u...
This win's a breeze for me, u'll see tha beast in Cee...
So if Mim has a leg up in this battle, its so I can rape him more easily...
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You making requests. . faggot, when you fight blunders are seen
But I'd respect your wish if your fuckin face wasn't right under my feet
Yeah. . you don't deserve this battle, fuck what you're saying queer
I'd say this match is hogwash. . but I don't see your mom bathing here
So that'd be false. . and fuck a comparison. . your rhymin' is worse
You'd think we were in Texas cause there Arno good lines in your verse
You stand no fucking chance. . every limb, I'ma be takin' em off
Dude your records on the line. . and I'm just here to hang up a loss
YOUR WHOLE VERSE WAS PLAYED. . seriously, this dude is mine. .
Though you are a utility to the league. . but it's just the seweage kind
I thought Mimesis won this very easily. He only had one weak line and that was the Revlution one. Eeverything else was solid. The hogwash line may have been a mum punch but it made me laugh all the same. Thats two good mum punches I've seen in as many weeks (Spits fishy one last week was dope) lol. But Mimesis just keeps getting better. I've no idea how the fuck he keeps reeling off all these good verses with lots of lines. He's just elevated like mad out of nowhere and took this easily. Jay Cee I was a bit disapointed with your verse to be honest. No offence, it wasn't bad or anything, but wasn't worthy of a champ match either. The chokin you line was very nice and so were the other two quotables but apart from that I didn't like much. No matter how well the homeless punch was worded it will ALWAYS be a homeless punch, ie one of the most played concepts there is. Don't use them. The 1-2 uppercut line was executed well but punch line league punchesare pretty played; I seem to be seeing a lot of them at the moment. But apart from that there isn't much else to say. Mimesis took this easily and just continues to impress in whatever league he's in. I'm not dickriding cause I used to hate the fuck out of him for that bitch move in the tag tournament, but I'm impressed by how much he's elevated since the 80 liner with JTR. Keep it up.
V/ Mimesis
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