Listenin'..money makers fo sho my nigga...quality is not good but i aint gon knock u fo that atall..beat is dirty south...youre flow is real robotic, you gotta add more emotion into it fam...so ure words fluctuate...really feel what ure sayin...i can tell u begginin cos all i can hear is u rereadin your lyrics...make sure next time u write lyrics to tha beat, if you are u dont want to be writin "x x x....xxxx..xx" it shud be more consistent like of "xxxxxxxxxxx"....but keep workin on it dawg...this is jus startin ull get better fam aight next joint i want u to work on:

- Work on fluctuatin ure voice, give more emotion

- Flow will be better if you write to tha beat....keep gettin up..n improvin..

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