Voted For: David Lama

David Lama
I feel bad for the parents that had this kid
cuz I’ll get rid of Mad quicker than Anger Management
Decent, not that original.
I know you fear me, my verses be intense bro
so I gotta say MS is a bitch. isn’t that common sense though?
Eh, not feeling this one.
Pffff. you said my punches wouldn’t have you scarred?
I was about to be Mad. but then I remembered how bad u are
Wording could have been better, decent.
you wanted to go 18 lines?. na dude. you suck!
the gun’s woulda gotten banned. cuz a M18 is 18 too much
Haha pretty good punch.
I’m old school. came to show what battles used to be of
and end Mad on a funny note. like the comic book usually does
Nice closer.

Overall, this verse is solid. Some punches could have been worded better to intensify the punch, but better then most of the battles I read. Just work on wittier wordplay.

Mad Skillz
got it ~reloaded out the holsta~ aimed at this ~freepostin joka~
coz he only good at takin "sigs" like a ~freeloadin smoker~//-1
Bad punch
hold up, on some ~twisted shit~ we only smell "pussy" ~amidst this "dick"~
and i ain't makin breakfast but i'll putchya in "abyss quick"//-2
Bad punch.
ya ~spits is listless~...more ass than ~thick bitches~
i think when he aint "usin paint", lamas prolly ~sniffin it~//-3
Bad punch.
got em ~weak and soon kicked~, his verses is ~cheap and stupid~
treat him like abandoned cars...left in the street ~leakin fluids~//-4
Bad wording and punch.
u know that i ~hold that~ shit that'll make ya ~dome crack~
coz when i say i'm "rockin jersey" i aint meanin a ~throwback~//-5
~enuff of dis crap~ ...he aint a ~thug...kids wack~
cuz hell yea my "lines are ~above this cat
Self glorification and bad punch.

Overall, you really didn't have any personals or punches in there. You really need to work on your concepts, cuz your verse really didn't have anything to mention.

v- David

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