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Old 04-22-06, 03:16 PM   #10
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Merkowitzzz

"^Get it? a basketball line... a simple concept son
^but thats all i need to NJ...
like the state that he's from"

Merk you had a decent verse, but shit like that won't carry you far in this league. You're concepts are decent, so all you really need is to fix up the structure and get consitent and you'll be a threat to most vets.

J-Brix

"My Minds Sharpe enough to stab and kill
I can merk o witzzz, witout the game of testin skill"

Brix, this was the only line I felt in your whole verse that was actually thrown towards Merk. All your other bars were just jokes, that we've all heard over many many years that don't even partain to Merk what so ever. That's like me using 10 lines of your momma jokes on someone and expecting to win lol Just step up your creativity and concepts.

Vote - Merk

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