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Mic Jordan
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IP:
Quote:
So.Rell
"It's Easter Sunday, I got nuffin planned I'll try sumfin new.
Go to Church and pray that some Skill Posseses you Two."
Your verse was filled with so many in correct concepts and fillers that you are just on the same level as the two people you're battling. Your best line wouldn't even meet a mediocore standing in a vet battle. You have a way to go, but you're in the right direction. Let's take your best line for example; decent concept in the second line...but as we know its pretty played, but it stood out in this battle because of how the other verses were. Use that bar I quoted and build of that. Focus on making your entire verse that but bettering your concepts with more personals.
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R-Rated good look on the advice I'll work on it. You'll see a difference in my next battle I hardly tried in this one.
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T.O.P.
Get the Fuck out the Ring!
"When the LP Rolls Out..
The Source will be Forced to make the Quotables a Three page Fold Out" - Kno of Cunninlynguists.
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