Wow.....I guess everyone was gonna use this beat. I also DLed it. I think your hook coulda used a little more umph. It sounded like you were bored with your own song. Also, you need to up your vocals just a little. there are spikes of your vocals that go high that you need to polish up a bit. Your flow is a little choppy too. You should try to be a little more fluid with your lyrics. Don't chop the words off, just continue to the next word. Not a bad track overall, but there are definitely areas that need to be worked on ™

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