the emotion in this was great i felt but the format looked shitty...no beef man,
the imagery was decent though and i liked the concept alot man,the vocab was below average a bit but it doesnt really matter to me,the story line was nice also what you spoke is true in alot of ways....anyways no hate man i was just giving you the positives and negatives to help you out instead of beating around the bush...nice decent peice here.

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