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Old 04-23-06, 08:33 PM   #30
Logic The Goonie
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Voted For: Blackmage

Eh, this shit was close. G had more punches that were actually close to ok, but black was more umm, consistent. Black, you first punch was forced like a motha fucka, don't ever stretch that hard just for one hit, cuz it's never that strong anyways. The name in your sig line was pretty good though. G, you gotta flip your shit a little more when you punch. I noticed that you had concepts, but they weren't flipped well and were just kind of ......there instead of contributing to the punch. For example:

Lyrical Assassin?.. nah, kid got KO'd by a DaCument...
Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent..

It's like, "Yeah, ok, he can't flow, like a blocked vent, and?". Ojnce you learn how to flip shit better, you'll be better. Until then...

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