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Old 04-24-06, 12:12 PM   #10
L.E
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Summers...good flow, damn near flawless. I like your delivery on this track. Lyrics were nothing great, but hell, this is something to bump to, not to poetically analyze. Quality is perfectly fine. Good verse.

The hook suits the beat..catchy.

Second verse...not bad, flow is shaky in spots. Lyrics are better here, but nothing great. Deliveyr could be worked on, but it's not bad. Havent heard shit from you before...definetely got potential. Keep it up.

Good shit. Keep it up.

Return the favor.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226176
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