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Old 04-24-06, 11:29 PM   #4
Fendi Fiasco
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The beat is real grimey soundin .... i fucks with it ... verse one wasn't spectacular ... the violence was wild.... but i like the hook.... verse 2 better than the first .... the flow seemed easier to come out... i see ya wordplay...3rd beginning flow seemed choppy ... grown man on menstrual shit... coo line... Overall... if all ur verses where solid around the hook .. it could bang ...some parts in ya verse i was just like .. uhhhh ok... keep bangin
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