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Old 04-25-06, 10:45 PM   #14
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This was feedback posted for Mr. Johnston

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mr johnston

that intro and outro was dismal, sounded like the same person flow is horrible, delivery is horrible, it sounds like u recordedd each bar seperately, it also sounds like your holding your words like fuuuuk or helllzzz shit like that, u need 2 up your flow and delivery game for real

lyrics 6/10
flow 2/10
delivery 2/10
personals 6/10
punches 7.5/10

Tha Q

Lmao nice intro, lmfao @ the corus, "i cant help but get erections ahahaha" anyway this shyt is dope, funny as fuck, soon as i heard it i wanted 2 finish hearing it, nothing bad to say about this track

lyrics 8/10
flow 9/10
delivery 9/10
personals 8/10
punches 8/10
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