quality needs mad improvement....you need a lil more energy...though it is a laid back style, you need to seem like your feelign it more.....not bad at all tho....flow style was good tho...you rode it pretty well....i dont like your accent much....or maybe its that your too loud on the beat.....lyrics arent bad at all....cocky style thats normal but you seem like you actually feel it and arent just writing about it...thats good....you got a good start to this shit.....just keep it up, n learn how to mix....go to the audio help section n read some tutorials

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