Listening...

Whoa...fuckin beat is killer. Gimme gimme.

First verse...I cana ctually hear the vocals well. Flow is kinda start stoppy. Kind sounds like your trying to stretch your words alot to make them flow. It's on beat, but it needs more work. Keep at it though, you'll get it soon enough. Lyrics were decent. Ysdat told me not to judge the production...so I'm not gonna haha. Delivery was fitting.

Second verse...flow was better, though it did fall off beat at some points. Lyrics were good. Delivery was good. Just work on that flow a bit. You'll have it down soon enough.

Third and fourth...same as the first two.

Quality tips:

Learn how to compress your vocals. Makes a HUGE difference. Triple N and Tha Q taught me how to do that shit. What program do you guys use..?

Invest in better mics. If you want to be serious about making music, this is neccessary. Doesn't have to be expensive. Samson CO1U is a very good mic. Condensor mic that does not requre pre amps or shit. Just plugs straight into a USB cord.

Not much else I can say other than keep playing around with things. Quality on this track was on the low side, but I'll leave it at that.

Decent track. Keep it up.

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