Knife shit you cutting me up is well fucking hopless
cuz this knife only comes packed..cuz the fucking kid is homless

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Your one of B.S, trying to beat me when I own rap sites…
Where theres a Will theres a way…just explains how you get him home at night!
Ever seen this might, well poor bitch I just won this spar
But you would be rich…if you were half as well-off as your punches are!

test, you weren't that bad, but not great either. i liked that packin knife line. real witty. try and do more shit like that, mixed with personals, then your sure to win. slick, nice verse. some meh lines in there and some dope lines. the will/way line was dope. keep that shit up man.

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