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Old 04-27-06, 04:39 PM   #8
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1x Vet of the Month (Apr. '04)? dam dog, you really care bout your rank on-line
and you garbage, only time you get credit where it's due is paying the bank on time!!
seen your past shit, all you do is vote sway and post shit to boost your ego
and your match against Mimesis? man I said most of your lines 3 years ago!!
aint nobody feelin this queer, your tactics aint a factor but you feelin the fear
2x Best Text Battle (May '04 & Dec. '04)?.................
......means you aint have a battle worth mentioning in a year!!

vs.

Ya still joined up............... so I'll give props where they're due
...Nah, fuck that... instead I'll just use ^^ them to beat the shit out of you
Fuck Tech, he ain't shit... watch me bash this low-valued lame
I won't say ure entirely worthless, just worth less than the 2nd part of ya name
You fat ass motherfucker, I'm coming at you for a violent brawling
So now this kids plate is stacked... but I don't mean how it is every morning
This bitch is a winner yo... he gets the W's from where he's from
Hell, he even hit this site with 3 w's..... followed by a .rapverse.com

tech, did pretty good. had the concepts, but just didn't word them to wher they'd hit really hard. but not bad. work on that. nick, you seemed to take this pretty easy. good, solid verse. had the punches and the personals. really liked the pancake/stacked line. simple, but it made me laugh. i'm more of a street battler and that shit reminded me of somethin that'd get thrown out there. tiight.

v/ nick easy
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