yea from the get go you were able to draw the reader into your storyline.
arryte first entry really set the tone and you were really able to personify a mad man.
second entry is where i saw the most imagry.
"Eating Crawling Insects To Only Fullfill My Hunger For Death.
Ripped Clothes, I'm Chained With A Man's Blood In My Breath." stood out the most here
third entry "Sculture My Reign In Bones For Architecture Is What True Murder Is." good play on words. and good conclusion

overall i liked it, your detail helped kept me intersested but i think adding more internals would elevate this piece even more. great drop.

i sigged my om maybe you can check it out and tell me what you think..

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