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Old 04-28-06, 05:04 PM   #19
Ysdat
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Voted For: Castro

very weak battle from both sides.

EyeDentdy;

u been waiting to battle me ...fuck it...I dont mind the facts...
cuz Im so raw...this nigga castro....had to hide his stats...

Very weak opener, not really a punch anywere in sight. Its a personal,but its weak bro.

its T.O.N. all day...yeah buddy...right on...
but uh...u only 15 dawg....so go get a permission slip befor u sighn on...
you cant spell.

cuz wat kind of nigga request 2880 minutes after check just to write his raps?
the type of nigga whose aveture looks like he trying to fight off rats...

slight personal again, and again cant spell.

cuz "up till this point" I aint know who the fuck you was...
till I heard u need to have AIM sex just to get ur dick sucked....

Weak, not even a punch.

dawg lol...u broke up wit a girl that u aint never even met...
but u only 15 though...so...its ok, since u aint hit puberty yet...

meh, better than other attempts at punches but nothing great.\

so go outside and get some sun...today...leave the net early....
cuz 3698 post on a website really just can't be healthy...

didnt rhyme,weak closer. didnt help your verse


Castro;
I’m so sick, straight ill, Doc said my sickness was more than contagious
Makin him have “EyeDentdy” crisis like a mentally retarded patient

decent opener. Good play on his name.

Talk about patient, shit I’m the one that was patience
You was probably prewritin so much wit all the time you was wastin

Ok attempt at wordplay, but could of [played it out a bit better.

You’s a butt ass nigga all you fuckin do is duck
Shit I’m a bout to just tell you just battle me and shut the fuck up

didnt really get this bar, seen as he was the one who made the thread.lol

You’s a fake ass nigga, claimin you born in the Bronx around drugs and cops *
Closest you ever been near drugs and cops was wit ya moms and pops

meh, this is weak.

Cuz ya mom’s a crack head ho and ya dad’s a straight up pig
You and the life you live is the same both a straight up bitch
Tell you the truth you aint street, come in my hood and get knocked down
You’s probably some fat fuck pot head on the comp. straight on “lock” down **
these four bars didnt end your verse well. but seen as you opponent dropped weak. you just scrapped through.