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Old 04-29-06, 06:39 PM   #10
Triple_N
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ah'ight...goiod choice on fab beat...u respit original hook so hook was koo....flow is fabish too...u went wit the multi syllable multies...3 words at end of every line rhyme...which is flow fab used so it fits this beat...way u riding same sound an dragging it out is koo...delivery was koo...vocals coulda used more variety like a tone on a certain phrase to make it standout more here an there it was a lil too continuous but u executed that laidback fab flow good...can tell u bumping him...lyrically was decent u aint have no line that really jumped out but it was horrble either..jus in the middle ya kno...overall good track def something peeps would bob too......1
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