Herb
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
IP:
everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
aiight opener,not really direct,wored pretty off.
i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
pretty decent
and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans
but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it
good
i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction
like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection
played
i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin'
see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him
lol.pretty good
just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit
you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live
Badly worded,plus it wasnt hitting hard..meh.
dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch
yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit
Nice
its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes
so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro
1st line was nice=set up.But 2nd meh...
vs.
Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before
WTF?..why would we want to?.
Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw.
Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score
no..sorta statement-ish..naw.
Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes
You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe.
so ole skool sounding..Im not feelin this.
Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
lol.good
but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery
hee,hee..pretty good.
Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n'
we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman...
aiight seen the concept waay to many times
Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap
If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.."
shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope..
ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat
???
overall/-decent battle..Drakel had wittier punches..Terumoto ur punches seem so bland an not even containing any creativity..so Drakel gets my vote.
V/-Drakel.
But I dont have enough post..so..FEED BACK.
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