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I don't lose
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IP:
ight lyrics are pretty good...quality is straing...you need to work on flow and delivery...its like you dont feel what your sayin...your just sayin it, and for a point your were a smidge off beat...your hook is ight....your verses are slackin...not totally bad tho...step it up keep on uppin ya game....thanks for the feed by the way....not bad keep it up
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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