I don't lose
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IP:
okay here we go.... quality is nice...maybe some pops or clips or somethin at the begining....
first verse is ight...you fall off for like a second....again a few lines could be upped for the flow....
second guy same...like a few lines are off....lyrics were well i dunno nothing you said stuck out...
third guy has good presence on the beat...not bad good flex of voice
not a bad track at all...but from hearing some parts, other parts coulda been better.....keep on tweekin ya flow a bit, your almost there
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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