This piece was solid all the way through the verse...I can sense the emotion displayed when you were typing this...showin a lot of hurt as well as hope for an escape as it flowed smoothly...Only thing I didn't like about it was that the length of the verse could've had more lyrics...because it seems like it was interestin & just stopped. But overall, it was a good pieces from the way I can relate to details of ya hood because it shows me that every ghetto has the same shit, just different spots. Keep doing what you do