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Old 05-01-06, 02:32 PM   #7
J Summers
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listening....beat sounds pretty dope as it starts off....the synths are kinda annoying... i like the way the first guy raps...on some lines....some lines he really fell off...like they were either rushed or ended to early... try countin sylables....the hook is fuckin dope 9/10 on the hook... its dope as hell....

l.e....

your verse is alot better than vibes... couple dope quotables... flow is right on point....hahahaha..i'm canadaian... thats cool....


overall
vibes verse needs a lil work
hook bodys the fuck out this beat
l.e.s verse was illy for sure
good ass track

rtf...i'll leave link in a min
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