Jay...come on bro...wassup wit u hittin up beats I already hit...lol...dats like sharin chicks, or dudes...or somethin...NVM


Back to the track

What's hot:
Beat, even though the volume is low
Jay's flow with the rhyming told the story of his verse well...nice there

Enygma's verse was good...and I think your styles match well...

What's not:
Enyg...experiment with a De-esser to cut those "highs" on the "S" words...not bad though...they compromise the quality of the track, esp. when I play them through my speakers on Window's Media = highs too intrusive

DIdn't remember the hook

Overall: solid track...wished it had a hook, or the hook was more memorable...





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